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you weren't the ring leader.

model: keira-jane ephraims

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~xXxlustdarknessxXx Jun 28, 2009, 8:00:01 PM
This image not only sends a image of pain and destruction, it also sends feeling of being lost. Like there is something in your life where you just don't understand. Like you want someone to listen and help you find that thing that is lost. Perhaps your heart itself? It's a stunning and very beautiful image. The only thing I might change would be the woman in the background. Unless it was meant to be something like a friendship breaking a part other wise it's fantastic and I don't think really much of anything and be done to make it any better than it already appears to be. Keep up the fantastic work.
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=hollyjphotography Jun 28, 2009, 5:38:49 PM
I'd like to start off and say i think this photo is very pretty. Not a simple or clique pose, it holds its own unique value. The way you've framed this photo is done very nicely, i enjoy the main model in the main part of the frame, but i think the model in the background is a nice touch. I love the dark colors of the black dresses, shoes and hair, and they work beautifully with the light skin colors and the pink and blue tones of the flooring. Well done on this photo, it is pretty and holds a beautiful concept.
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Mood: Joy ~alkioko Jun 27, 2009, 2:33:11 AM
nice capture :)

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~h23b Jun 27, 2009, 2:53:25 AM
cute

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=t-R-i-S-h Jun 27, 2009, 3:38:42 AM
I like how the two girls wear the same kinda shoes and dress: it gives a sense of cleanliness (know what I mean?)
There's something in this picture, I don't know what exactly but this could easily be used for a great commercial :clap:

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~arianneharris Jun 27, 2009, 3:39:19 AM
nice :)
like the concept!:woohoo:
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Mood: Love ~Panka2009 Jun 27, 2009, 3:49:20 AM
Beautiful picture =)
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~like-textas Jun 27, 2009, 4:09:03 AM
the composition is nice and so is her pose.

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~yiARa Jun 27, 2009, 4:25:50 AM
This is adorable!!
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It's like a magazine cover

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~yiARa Jun 27, 2009, 4:25:51 AM
This is adorable!!
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It's like a magazine cover

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~youngSadie Jun 27, 2009, 5:07:26 AM
I like it ;)

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Canon
Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
1/800 second
F/5.0
38 mm
400
Jun 21, 2009, 2:24:23 PM

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